romance otaku

Hello(: Some people felt nothing 'romantic' happened in the first chapter - but seriously? I don't think a story should rush into romance at the very first chapter. I feel ...

((Although I wrote the first chapter in a third person PoV, I considered experimenting and using a first person PoV, instead. I may go back one of these days and ...

((AUTHOR'S NOTE: I started on this project in the late of this morning, discarding my other projects. Now that I've introduced some structure in my life, I'm hoping that I'll ...

Hey people of YWS, I've returned as of now, i will most likely be leaving again, as soon as i get my needed reviews. It's just because the fact I've ...

This is not the sequel to Welcome to Miami. This is nothing like Welcome to Miami. This story is just about the opposite of that happy-teenaged-giddy feeling with Welcome to ...

Hey guys! I'm so glad you guys are checking chapter five of my story out. :) Please leave a comment or something below just so I can get a variety ...

hey man. just here for your review. well, it has potential, but it is lacking in needed details and has many details that we dont need to know. dont get ...

i dont know what it was callled, but it was 5 pages of the worst writing in the world. the characters didnt even have names!!! even worse, we had to ...

well, since someone alredy did it in detale, i dont have to ^_^ sadly, it seemed like you skiped too much time at the begining. first they (jackson) just met, ...

hi agian. this series is great. im not really sure why you resubmited it...oh well. time to start criting ^_^ the first paragraph sounds like the words are too shoved ...

As the yellow taxi drove down the long stone driveway, in front a them appeared a large country estate with a sign that said "Dr. Daniel J. Pierce" The house ...

I looked down as the chopper lifted off the pad to see the word Goodbye spelled out in stones, "Goodbye Beej!" I said to myself, as we were leaving what ...

ok, i was looking forward to this chapter, and i have to say, you delivered. there are a few problems though. first, i think there is a spelling mistake with ...

i was very happy about the time parodox, but very unhappy at the same time. about in the middle of the book, the plot starts yelling "i needed more pages!!!", ...

I wrote this at age nine in the beginning of the fourth grade. I recently took it back out and revised it a little bit. I want to publish it ...